Which beginning do you like better?

B . B is awesome but in a way it sounds like you're reliving the "Twilight" saga with the whole pale skin pigment .If he's not a vampire then the pale skin is an awesome description ...I personally would like to see more of this. But without the stereotypical set-ons of a vampire story . If it's not a vampire story then cudos , you've got a fan. But if so might wanna go with a different concept .